Yes, the title I am using is the revisionist title. I like it better, it makes the poem less narrow in application.
burnt honey eyes
burnt honey eyes, rich and rapturous.
a hunter's hunger made perilous.
eyes aglow with passion and delight.
smile affixed in soul's coherent light.
framed in dark illusions of the night.
burnt honey eyes, rich and rapturous.
the moment the fire consumes us.
I cannot look away, flesh made porous.
eyes aglow with passion and delight.
later, alone in the swirl of bright
memories, I see your smile, so right.
burnt honey eyes, rich and rapturous.
sitting in a crowd of friends, to us
there are more than words connecting us.
eyes aglow with passion and delight.
all I need is your glance to feel thrust
into the chaos of passionlight.
burnt honey eyes, rich and rapturous.
eyes aglow with passion and delight.
William F. DeVault. all rights reserved.
Monday, June 25, 2007
burnt honey eyes
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You will note, gentle reader, that all works under this blog now display "tags" to help classify and assign the works for your review and enjoyment.
These largely fall into 4 categories:
Year of writing, e.g. "1999"
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We are still in the process of cleaning up the tags, so please bear with us. Yes, some muses are classified under more than one tag, some poems appear in more than one book, or not yet in any volume, and some years are...hazy.
These largely fall into 4 categories:
Year of writing, e.g. "1999"
Book published in, e.g. "from an unexpected quarter"
Inspiring muse, e.g. "Aubergine"
Genre, e.g. "erotica"
We are still in the process of cleaning up the tags, so please bear with us. Yes, some muses are classified under more than one tag, some poems appear in more than one book, or not yet in any volume, and some years are...hazy.
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